大作文汇总
图表作文
柱状图
1 多因素动态变化的柱状图
- 多因素动态变化的柱状图,对比不同因素在时间变化中的同向/反向变化,反映新兴现象或积极趋势。
- 第一段概述两因素变化趋势相似/相反,再详细叙述趋势;
- 第二段先说明代表的现象,再分析现象的3个成因,即从宏观到微观(经济/政策、价格/技术、个人意愿);
- 第三段展望未来趋势,提出概括性建议
①It can be observed from the chart above that -A- and -B- exhibited similar/opposite trends during the period from -起始时间- to -末尾时间-. ②During this time span, -A- underwent a progressive -increase/decrease-. ③In a similar fashion/In contrast, -B- witnessed a continuous -increase/decrease-.
①This chart is designed to visualize an ongoing change in -主题词-. ②This trend can be attributed to three major contributing factors. ③In the first place, as a direct result of economic growth/governmental support/favorable policies/-其他宏观原因-, there has been a gradual rise in the number of individuals who -选择有增长趋势的事物-. ④Besides, the plummeting prices/the advancement in technology/-其他次要宏观原因- have made it possible for individuals to -选择增长-. ⑤Furthermore, there is a growing inclination of residents/consumers/college students/-相关群体- to -个人选择行为或意识-, which has in turn led to an upwrad trend in -增长事物- over the past years.
①It is highly probable that -增长事物- will continue to experience a rise in popularity in the foreseeable future. ②Therefore, it is essential for individuals/-相关群体- to recognize the potential of this emerging trend, and make the most of the opportunity it presents.
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2 单因素持续增长的柱状图
- 图表用来呈现某行业/市场的积极增长态势
- 第一段先概述增长趋势,再取起始、中间、结束时间的数据描述增长过程
- 第二段从3个不同角度(政策、主观意识、客观条件)分析增长的原因
- 第三段先指出该行业/市场还任重道远,再重申这样的积极态势将持续下去
①The data in the chart indicate the astonishing/steady pace at which -主题词- has expanded. ②Specifically, the number/amount/share of -主题词- went up gradually from -X数据- in -年份- to -Y数据- in -年份-, and finally passing the -Z数据- mark in -年份-.
①This remarkable growth owes a great deal to the strong support from/the sustained efforts of the government/-相关行业名词- industry/leading enterprises/-相关行业-. ②In recent years, -对应人员或机构- have/has adopted effective measures such as ------ to enhance product quality/productivity/-相关名词-. ③This has also been accompanied by a growing awareness of/demand for -某事项- among -某群体-. ④Moreover, -某客观条件- constitude another crucial factor in prompting -某群体- to -某行为-.
①Admittedly, -图表代表的主体- have/has a long way to go, as the -相关行业名词- industry/consumers/-相关群体- is/are still faced with -某个待解决问题-. ②However, given the factors mentioned above, the momentum toward its/their popularization will certainly be as irresistible as shown in the chart.
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3 多因素之间在不同时间点对比
- 横坐标是不同因素,纵坐标是数据,每个因素都有两个时间点的数据(图例标明时间);大致可以分为上升、下降两类
- 第一段先概述图表主题,再分别描述两类因素的变化趋势
- 第二段由主到次分析不同因素呈现不同变化的原因
- 第三段先肯定图表展示的行为/趋势,然后转向提出建议,促进图表所指对象采取进一步行动
- 注意时态:数据的起止年份在过去,用一般过去时、过去完成时
①The chart provides information about how -图表主题- has changed between -起始年- and -结束年-. ②During this time span, -图表中上升类别- followed an upward trend. ③In contrast, -下降类别- witnessed a dramatic decrease.
①What the chart reflects is that -揭示的规律-, which can be ascribed to the following reasons. ②To begin with, against the backdrop of -原因1-, it comes as no surprise that so many people/young adults/consumers/-某群体- have flocked to -上升的类别-. ③Furthermore, thanks to -原因2-, -上升的类别- hold a great fascination for the public/young adults/consumers/-某群体-. ④By comparison, -下降的类别- is/are not so much sought-after as before. ⑤In addition, although not listed as a major factor, -其它原因- influences people's choices to a certain extent.
①While it is a smart move to -图表所指行为-, drifting with the tide is not advised. ②Instead, -所指对象- should -采取行动-.
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4 单因素呈增长趋势
- 往往展现我国某一领域或行业的积极变化
- 第一段先选取开始和结束年份数据描述增长过程,再简述增长速度或倍数
- 第二段从两个方面说明增长背后的原因:事物本身的好处以及外部的推动
- 第三段揭露行业目前存在的一些问题,建议加强监管以保持继续增长
As demonstrated in the chart, China/the -行业- industry/-图表涉及领域- has enjoyed a steady and vigorous growth in -某方面-, from -X数据- in -起始年- to -Y数据- in -结束年-, at an annual rate of approximately -年增长率-% /approximately -倍数- times as much/many as before.
①This rising trend may come down to two factors. ②For one thing, as a convenient/effective means to -do sth-, -主题词- cater to the needs of many people/consumers/students/-某群体-, not least those who -具有某特点的人-. ③This explains why -主题词- hold wide appeal. ④For another, with the (rapid development/widespread application/increasing popularity) of -外部因素-, -主题相关事物- put a wealth of -某种资源- at people's/consumers'/students'/-相关群体的- fingertips. ⑤It is indisputable that this will attract/encourage/lead -群体选择某事-.
①However, -主题相关行业- is/are still far from fully mature as some problems have surfaced in recent years, such as -相关问题-. ②Accordingly, the goverment/the department concerned should enforce tough regulations to ensure -行业的良好发杂-.
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饼图、条形图
1 多种选择因素的饼图/条形图
- 往往涉及某群体的选择,反映新趋势、新现象
- 第一段概括图表主题,然后从高到低罗列表中数据(模板句③视情况写)
- 第二段先点出图表所反映的现象,随后分析该现象背后的两点原因:从主观(个人意愿)到客观(现实因素)
- 第三段对图表主题代表的领域/行业进行预测,再提出相关建议
①The pie/bar chart illustrates -概述图表信息-. ② A stands out at the top of the list (--%), followed by B and C , which comprise --% and --% respectively. ③The remaining options/groups include(s) D (--%) and E (--%).
①These statistics highlight a marked tendency for college sutdents/the public/-涉及人群- to -图表主题-. ②Two major reasons account for this phenomenon. ③For one thing, in contemporary society, individuals from a range of backgrounds/many -图表中人群- are confronted with the challenge/issue of -原因1-. ④Consequently, they are increasingly inclined to regard -高占比因素- as the most suitable choice. ⑤For another, given that -原因2-, many individuals are eager to seize this valuable opportunity by -与高占比因素相关行为-. ⑥Should they fail to do so, it might seriously impede the progress in ------.
①In view of the above-mentioned reasons, -相关行业/领域- will continue to flourish in the foreseeable future. ②It is thus necessary for the -行业- industry/goverment/companies/... to sustain its/their efforts in -相关措施- so as to fulfill the ever-evolving needs of people/citizens/users/customers/tourists/...
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2 反映持不同态度、观点、选择的人群占比
- 图表用来对比不同人群对于某现象/行为/事物/选择的人群占比,以及由此做出的不同选择
- 第一段简要描述主要的项目及其占比
- 第二段分析造成不同选择的原因
- 结尾总结趋势,给出建议
①The pie/bar chart illustrates the proportions of -----. ②It is evident from the chart that --% of the survey participants exhibit an inclination toward(s) -----, while --% lean toward(s) -----. ③Additionally, --% of the respondents indicate that they have a tendency to -----(, and another --% report that they -----).
①----- (and -----) is/are the primary factor(s) that influence(s) -图表主题-. ②For those inclined to -----, -某选择- hold(s) special appeal as it/they give(s) them the opportunity/ability/option to -----. ③In comparison, for those who -----, -另一种选择- offers a unique advantage by providing them with -----. ④Furthermore, there are also those who -----. ⑤From their perspective, -某选择- is an indepensable and arguably the most effective course of action to -----.
①It can be predicted that as -相关背景-, an increasing number of people/college students/-相关群体- will need to deal with -与主题相关情境-. ②It is thus imperative for them to thoroughly analyze the benefits and drawbacks of all possible options prior to making a decision.
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3 反映某人群的消费偏好、教育偏好、娱乐偏好等
- 第一段先指出最大众化和最小众的两种偏好,再特别指出一项令人意外的偏好
- 第二段一次分析原因:最大众、占比略大且令人意外、最小众
- 第三段进行预测,提出建议
①According to the data presented in the chart, a substantial proportion of -某群体-, approximately --%, favor -选择1-, whereas a mere --% choose the alternative option of -选择2-. ②Noticeably, those who opt for -选择3- account for a surprising --% of the overall respondents.
①Given that a fair portion of respondents prefer -原因1-, it comes as no surpise that -选择1- emerge(s) as the dominant choice for -相关行为或群体-. ②Meanwhile, there has been a surge in the popularity of -选择3- among -对应群体-, primarily due to the valuable opportunities it/they provide(s) for -原因3-(, as well as its/their greater appeal compared with -选择2,即占比低-). ③Moreover, the facts mentioned above also partly explain why -选择2- is/are rarely taken into account.
①In light of -原因/背景-, it is highly probable that -行业/现象- will continue to ----- for a considerable period of time. ②Therefore, it is reasonable for those in charge of the -相关业务- business to make sustained efforts to -建议- so that they can cater to the diverse demands of customers/consumers/tourists/citizens/-相关群体-.
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4 对比某人群中某现象/行为的起因
- 第一段按占比由高到低描述3到4个主要原因及其对应占比
- 第二段分析造成该现象/行为的各种因素,以及它们对群体内不同人群的驱动力
- 结尾表达肯定态度,指出其在某方面的积极作用
①The above chart illustrates the distribution of individuals who choose to -图表行为- for various reasons. ②It is particularly woth noting that a substantial proportion of respondents, approximately --%, base their decision on -原因1-. ③And as indicated by --% of respondents, -原因2- serves as another contributing factor to their choice to -图表行为-. ④Moreover, --% of the survey participants state that their motivation stems from -原因3-.
①These statistics suggest a prevalent trend of -图表现象/行为-, which is a natural result of -原因1- and is anticipated to endure in the foreseeable future. ②That said, there remains a significant portion of -相关群体- who exhibit no interest in -原因1对应做法- but instead -原因2对应做法-. ③Furthermore, it is not to be neglected that -原因3- still holds special importance for some of them.
①In summary, it is heartening to observe an abundance of -图表群体- who demostrate a willingness to -图示行为/现象-. ②After all, -图示现象/行为/群体相关的内容- have a vital role to play in -某方面-.
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折线图
- 第一段先总体阐述总体变化趋势,再介绍最具代表性的数据(注意时间确定时态),可适当进行比较(数据有2条或以上折线的话②后半句和③句可以不写)
- 第二段先概述趋势,再分析成因
- 第三段先总结重申折线图所反映的趋势,再结合主题给出建议
- 下面的AB模板分别是积极上升趋势、消极下降趋势
- 如果遇到"消极增长"(比如不健康生活方式导致疾病比例上升),或者"积极下降"(比如消费者对一次性餐具下降),则可用“拼好文”方式,重新组合段落
- 遇到“消极上升”:A1-B2-B3
- 遇到"积极下降":B1-A2-A3
①As the line chart shows, the number/amount of ----- (and -----) in -某国/某领域- has/had increased for -- years. ②In --, the country/industry had -年份1的数据-, up from -年份2的数据- -数词- years ago(, with the number/amount of -年份1的另一个项目- reaching/exceeding -数量- in the meantime). (③Despite a slight slowdown in -中间年份-, the growth still sustains/-ed its momentum./The year -数据对象- witnessed a substantial rise in -中间年份-, which passed the -整数- mark.)
①The data illustrates a positive trend in which -图表数据展现的正面现象-. ②It can mainly be attributed to -经济/技术发展背景-, which have/has laid a firm foundation for -主题相关行为-. ③Furthermore, the goverment's/industry leaders' constant efforts as part of its/their larger strategy to ----- have also played a constructive role.
①Currently, there is a growing awareness of -相关主题词- and hencce greater willingness to -主题词相关行为- among the general public/-相关群体-. ②In my view, to cater to this trend requires further improvements in -措施-.
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①As the line chart shows, the number/amount of ----- (and -----) in -某国/某领域- has/had decreased for ----- years. ②In -年份1-, the country/industry had -年份1数据-, down from -年份2数据- -数词- years ago(, with the number/amount of -年份1另一数据- reaching as low as -数量-). (③The year -年份- witnessed a substantial decline in -大幅下降的数据名-, which fell below the -整数- mark.)
①The data illustrates a negtive trend in which -图表数据展现的负面现象-. ②It can mainly be attributed to -信息爆炸/技术发展过快等大背景-, which have/has proven to be a serious obstacle to -被阻碍的正面行为-. ③Furthermore, social media/tech giants/advertisers/-其他相关群体- have/has also played a role in -不良趋势-.
①Currently, a growing number of ordinary people/-相关群体- are prone to -主题相关负面行为-, which has become a matter of deep concern. ②In my view, to reverse this trend requires joint efforts from all sectors of society to -建议-.
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表格
- 第一段描述表格信息,重点归纳“群体倾向于遵循某原则/做出某行为”上,选取最具代表性的两组数据进行阐述(体现区别、对比或凸显主旨的两组)
- 第二段点明表格反应的群体差异,然后分析造成差异的因素
- 第三段总结表格反应的主旨,然后提出建议
①As can be seen from the table, there is a clear correlation between -因素1- and -因素2-. ②Further examination reveals that those who -表格某数据代表的现象- are inclined to -做出行为/具有特性-. ③By comparison, those who -另一现象- make up a larger/the largest proportion of the respondents who -另一行为/特性-.
①Undoubtedly, the table illustrates that -表格反映的群体差异-. ②The following two factors significantly contribute to this discrepancy. ③For one thing, it is generally known that -现实或主观因素- is/are highly likely to prompt some people/-某群体- to -对应上一段的行为/特性-. ④For another, -另一现实或主观因素- is/are closely associated with the tendency for some other people/-另一群体- to -上段对应的另一行为/特性-.
①To sum up, the survey serves as a reminder that we should by no means downplay the importance of -与表格主题相关的正面行为-. ②Therefore, in an effort to achieve -主题相关目标- (and avoid -----), it is always advisable to -措施-.
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图画作文、材料作文
材料作文
- 适用于赞同材料观点,如果材料描述的是负面现象,可以将材料主题词化为相应的正面现象
- 第一段先提炼材料观点,表示赞同
- 第二段,①句承上启下引出论证,②③句从个体/微观层面说明材料所述现象带来的好处,④⑤从整体/宏观层面说明积极意义
- 第三段再次肯定作者观点,并发出呼吁
①-材料相关话题- has become a hotly debated issue among the general public. ②According to the author of the given excerpt, -材料主题-, which from my perspective is perfectly vaild.
①The author's idea may sound a bit routine, but it indeed gets to the heart of the matter. ②For one thing, it is closely aligned with the goal(s) of -材料相关内容-. ③To this end /To these ends, -相关主体,如政府等- should provide as many opportunities as possible, such as -机会举例-, for -people/students- to -做某事-, thereby equipping them with various practial skills/a broader perspective on... for the future/.... ④For another, it is in the interests of -our society/communtiy- to -相关正面行为/观念-, which can facilitate the all-round development of -our society/communtiy-.
①To sum up, given the increasing importance of -主题相关内容- in today's -adj.- world/campuses/market/workplace, the author's suggestion is quite constructive. ②Therefore, the sensible thing to do is (to) -发出呼吁-.
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